So I was confused how to put forward this and yet make myself clear and hence I decided to turn it into a one liner and also a quote. My message is same in both of them and now it’s on you how you take it.
- She was scared of going out after dark; the reason was “dogs”.
- “Don’t be afraid of going out after the dark because of the dogs, they aren’t going to get extinct overnight.”
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A bilingual writer, Moushmi Radhanpara has authored three poetry collections so far, namely POSIES and 03:21 AM –An Ode to Rust & Restlessness, and Resignation of an Angel. She is also scribbling an unplanned rough draft of a story as a part of NANOWRIMO 2020 and hopes that something might come out of it. She has also co-authored two books, The Lockdown Stories and Mirage so far. Her poetries can be found on her blog https://aestheticmiradh.com/ and a few other online portals. She believes in the fact that a better reader makes a better writer. Reading a 100 books a year is her latest obsession. She can be found either drunk on coffee or hiding away from everything and admiring the gorgeous sun.
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Both of them were great. Loved it.
The first one just made her aware of the reason.
The second one pushed her to be positive and fight.
The underlying truth was same, just the meaning conveyed was a lot different.
It was a great try on your part. 😊
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I am glad you liked it. And yes I tried and how my attempt was it is on my readers to decide.
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Your attempt was really great. Looking forward to reading more from you. ☺️
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one gains knowledge by facing their fears. 🙂
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It was more than just ‘fears’ here!
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of course it was, i just chose to address one subject. 🙂
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That was a smart try!!
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Yes I could see that your readers understood. I’m in awe of the boldness of them. In your face, challenging folk to see the applications. Why, however(rhetorical).It says something about the writer, besides attitude.
To be interpreted either as pragmatic or exploration wise, imaginatively (metaphorically). Dogs, creatures which threaten, which lay in the dark of night, the night of life, the night of the mind. Real dogs, human dogs, problematic puzzles perhaps even pointing a finger of guilt at the psyche. Umm?
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My sole purpose was to reach people through a metaphor. I am glad people get what I try to say. Thanx for stopping by!
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Second one was good………….
Good try…
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Thanks a lot dear.
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Your welcome………
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Interesting and loved it! Second quote completes the first positively and powerfully.
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Thank you so much.
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Superb Moushami. The dog gives different meanings being positive and negative and you have written so well.
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Thank you so much.
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