I am a strong independent woman,
They say, but I do have my own doubts.
You are built of iron, but does it never break?
You are self-sufficient,
You don’t need anyone,
But how can I be my own doppelganger?
You are a confident woman
They say, but I do have my reservations,
For deep down I am shattering bit by bit
The iron has been hit too hard,
It’s moulding and remoulding,
Losing all its true essence.
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Published by Moushmi Radhanpara
A bilingual writer, Moushmi Radhanpara has authored three poetry collections so far, namely POSIES and 03:21 AM –An Ode to Rust & Restlessness, and Resignation of an Angel. She is also scribbling an unplanned rough draft of a story as a part of NANOWRIMO 2020 and hopes that something might come out of it. She has also co-authored two books, The Lockdown Stories and Mirage so far. Her poetries can be found on her blog https://aestheticmiradh.com/ and a few other online portals. She believes in the fact that a better reader makes a better writer. Reading a 100 books a year is her latest obsession. She can be found either drunk on coffee or hiding away from everything and admiring the gorgeous sun.
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B’ful and very true..
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Thank you dear.
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So very true and very well expressed, Moushmi!
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Thanks a ton dear. I truly appreciate your reading and sharing your thoughts.
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Even the toughest iron there is can only take too much heat and pounding.
Truthful and beautifully expressed, Moushmi.
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Thanks a lot for appreciating my novice work, it makes me feel over-joyed.
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Don’t mention it. It’s beautiful as it is truthful. I love it ☺
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Love the way you use the idea of iron. Nice work xxx
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Thank you so much dear for leaving behind your wonderful words.
I am glad you liked it.
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Thank YOU for posting such a true piece of work xxxx
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The pleasure is all mine.
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i hope you read your own words and believe them
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I will try.
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Very well written. You seem to know yourself and not to lose perspective by others compliments. Good writing. Thank you for stopping by. Please come back soon.
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Thank you so much for the appreciation and I sure will visit soon.
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You’re welcome. See you around!!
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