Den. Ben. 10

Posted byMoushmi RadhanparaPosted inJust when I don't know anything., Ramblings of my mind.Tags:, , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,

Many years had passed when,

I found myself living in a troubled den,

It was surely a troubled den-

For it seemed that there I had passed years 10.

I cried and cried, I tried to complain to Ben,

But no fruitful aid could he provide me then.

This my situation was, my dear Ken,

And I could not overcome it even in 10.

I cried and cried

I tried and tried to talk to Ben,

But time was unfortunate for me

And nothing could happen then.

Disturbed as I was, to soothe myself I took a pen,

Comfort was not meant for me,

Even after scribbling on pages 10.

And yet many more years had passed when,

I was still living in the troubled den. !

PS: This is a small piece that I wrote really a long time ago, probably during my younger school days. I don’t know if it makes sense to you, let me know on the comments below.

Published by Moushmi Radhanpara

A bilingual writer, Moushmi Radhanpara has authored three poetry collections so far, namely POSIES and 03:21 AM –An Ode to Rust & Restlessness, and Resignation of an Angel. She is also scribbling an unplanned rough draft of a story as a part of NANOWRIMO 2020 and hopes that something might come out of it. She has also co-authored two books, The Lockdown Stories and Mirage so far. Her poetries can be found on her blog https://aestheticmiradh.com/ and a few other online portals. She believes in the fact that a better reader makes a better writer. Reading a 100 books a year is her latest obsession. She can be found either drunk on coffee or hiding away from everything and admiring the gorgeous sun.

35 thoughts on “Den. Ben. 10”

  1. I guess its too personal.. difficult to understand out of context..
    but all i can understand..
    u r no longer in that den ..
    U hv got more way to use ur pen ..
    now u don’t cry don’t cry every now n then ..
    Its a thing of past when u scribbled pages 10
    Now sky is Limit ,, when u hv ur pen .. u don’t need any ben or ken 😃👍

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    1. Many bloggers hear started writing poetry from younger School days,comparing to them I am a kid.Actually I discovered writer in me when I started flirting with girl in chats😝😝..Soo you guys are like really seniors for me .regarding this.. At that young age you did a very decent job..👏👏👏👏👏

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    1. Yes, when I was giving my 10th, there were a lot family issues going on to which no one seemed to care. I was more of a loner back then but no one had any idea what actually disturbed me, even at home people thought that these things do not affect me in any way, but they did and it changed a lot in me.

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