I lay on my back, the cool concrete floor lightly touching my body. I looked up at the sky smiling, but dark clouds loomed over me, hiding the shining moonlit night. The cool wind caressed my skin softly and just when my mouth cracked into a tight lipped smile, the first drop of rain water kissed my cheeks. I could see the faintest of stars shining in the sky, which was showering me with the cool splashes of rainwater so late in the night.
“At 2, I think it was really too late.”
Sitting upright, I silently slipped into my room, outside the night seemed beautiful, but inside the dark clouds still lumbered on.
The thought of going back to reading a few more pages of the novel struck me just when I drifted off to a deep sleep.
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A bilingual writer, Moushmi Radhanpara has authored three poetry collections so far, namely POSIES and 03:21 AM –An Ode to Rust & Restlessness, and Resignation of an Angel. She is also scribbling an unplanned rough draft of a story as a part of NANOWRIMO 2020 and hopes that something might come out of it. She has also co-authored two books, The Lockdown Stories and Mirage so far. Her poetries can be found on her blog https://aestheticmiradh.com/ and a few other online portals. She believes in the fact that a better reader makes a better writer. Reading a 100 books a year is her latest obsession. She can be found either drunk on coffee or hiding away from everything and admiring the gorgeous sun.
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Rain drops are most daring enough to kiss you
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Oh yes, they are!
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Hmmmm…you should not fall for them..be careful
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I have already fallen for them.
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Hmmm…change your status of relationship then
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Hahahaha
Okay!
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Hmmmm….good girl
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🙂
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How did you celebrate your birthday
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Nothing much, it rained like hell here.
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As you are in love with rain drops..may be they want to impress you..why do girls don’t understand yaar..give them a chance..they have to come from long distance to kiss you…you have to be thankful
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Okay, but then too much rain prevents you from going out!
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May be it is obsessed with you..it cares about you and don’t want you to suffer with cold
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😀
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Rains make everything beautiful and perfect❤
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I totally agree with you.
Thanks so much for stopping by.
Have a lovely day ahead.
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It is my pleasure. Do stop by my blog if you get time. 😀
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Yes dear, I sure will, as soon as I can.
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Beautiful words so well written Moushmi and rain makes u feel so wonderful and feel like kissing the raindrops falling on our face
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Thanks a lot kamal for sharing your beautiful opinion. I do agree that rains are just wonderful.
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Yes absolutely Moushmi the best climate
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🙂
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Thanks
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🙂
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Welcome
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Its no secret…i love rain…just love so damn much….. Is always great to read about anything related to rain and the feeling we get when it rains….. great work…. Btw…i would have gotten a little soaked before heading back to bed….lol😁😁✌
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So I though that day to get soaked too, but then it’s just a lot of work in the middle of the night to change again.
Plus, I’d never be able to sleep if that happened 😀
I am happy that you enjoyed it.
Thanks so for sharing your views and visiting my blog.
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No need to thank me everytime….its a pleasure to read the posts you make…..also you are right about getting wet thing….nowadays…here we are getting soaked almost evryday…gotta write something about rain soon….😂😂😂
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No, not rain first!!
You got to post the 5th part of your story first.
I am still waiting in case you have forgotten about it 😀
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Oh wow….i did not forget…i was gonna do it today…thank you for your support….you made my shitty office day bright.
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Hahaha
Always my pleasure.
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Beautiful feeling and we’ll written Moushmi 👌 rains have something magical in them😊
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I agree, rains do have something magical in them.
Thanks a lot for your appreciation.
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Lovely written, rain and late night blend well and enlighten us so much. Great post.
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Thanks vihshal for stopping by and leaving behind your heart felt comment.
I am glad you feel the same way about rains.
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I enjoyed reading it a lot and it did churned lot of my emotions while reading it.
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I am so glad. 🙂
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Very creatively written. Even i love rains. Rainy is the best of all seasons.
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Thanks a lot dear for sharing your views.
It is after a great time to enjoy.
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Beautiful words as always dear, thank you for good sharing
Anita
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Thanks a lot dear for your review.
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Beautifully written and hoping ya got caught up on sleep too 😃
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Oh yes, I am all back on track with my sleeping hours.
thank you so much darling.
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Oh good!! Whew!
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🙂
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You are a creative writer…enjoyed reading
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Thank you so much Saurabh,
I am so glad you visited my site and liked what you read.
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Your most welcome Moushmi
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Your first para had a soothing effect as in a poem…. why don’t you really make sweet poem out of it
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That’s a thought!
What happens with me always, is that I intend to write a poem, and then end up with some paragraph or something.
I don’t know why, but I think I am just not so good with poems.
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I bet, you will be too good with poems too… just some mind blocks… try…and try….
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I think, I will.
Why just give up?
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Yesss…that’s the spirit…
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I love rain
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Me too, until of course it gets too much and prohibits me from going out anywhere.
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I like to swim in heavy rain
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In your work clothes?
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Good Day 🙂
https://nightmares2017.wordpress.com/2017/09/01/nightmares/
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