A bilingual writer, Moushmi Radhanpara has authored three poetry collections so far, namely POSIES and 03:21 AM –An Ode to Rust & Restlessness, and Resignation of an Angel. She is also scribbling an unplanned rough draft of a story as a part of NANOWRIMO 2020 and hopes that something might come out of it. She has also co-authored two books, The Lockdown Stories and Mirage so far. Her poetries can be found on her blog https://aestheticmiradh.com/ and a few other online portals. She believes in the fact that a better reader makes a better writer. Reading a 100 books a year is her latest obsession. She can be found either drunk on coffee or hiding away from everything and admiring the gorgeous sun.
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उलझ गए हैं हम कुछ इस तरह,
हों जैसे रेशम के रेशों की तरह।
गांठों में बंध गयी है,
जीने की हर एक जायज वजह।
टूट जाऊं तो ही अच्छा है,
न रहेगी घुटन की कोई भी वजह।
विरह गान तुम न छेड़ो,
करुण तान भी न छेड़ो।
काल कोठरी में बैठ,
कोई संताप का राग मत छेड़ो।
बिखर गयी मैं,
तो ही आजाद हूँ,
बंधन का तुम
फिर से कोई अलाप मत छेड़ो।
Oh my.
Sending you hugs.
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Thank you so much dear 🙂
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Wow awesome words Moushmi but when there is no love it sure strangles u.
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I agree, I thinklove can never do such things, it is the concept of jealousy, insecurity which might choke someone.
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Yes absolutely true love is sublime and pure it can never hurt anyone.
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True thing
When people start bossing over u nd hurtn u
It isnt love
It is suffocating
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I agree, thank you so much love for being so appreciative here 🙂
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It’s like the chain which you talked about in your earlier post…..keeps entangling you more and more each time you try to free!!
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Excatly!! Thank you so much Sifar for understanding this.
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उलझ गए हैं हम कुछ इस तरह,
हों जैसे रेशम के रेशों की तरह।
गांठों में बंध गयी है,
जीने की हर एक जायज वजह।
टूट जाऊं तो ही अच्छा है,
न रहेगी घुटन की कोई भी वजह।
विरह गान तुम न छेड़ो,
करुण तान भी न छेड़ो।
काल कोठरी में बैठ,
कोई संताप का राग मत छेड़ो।
बिखर गयी मैं,
तो ही आजाद हूँ,
बंधन का तुम
फिर से कोई अलाप मत छेड़ो।
~ गौरी
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Beautiful
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Thank you pragal ji I hope my lines are matching with the essence of this post ,😊
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I certainly think they compliment 🙂
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Bikhar gyi mai. Toh hi aazaad hun… Waah…Beautiful lines.👌
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Thank you for compliment. 😊😊
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They sure are 🙂
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Thank you so much for the lovely words here Gouri. I am really happy reading this, again and again.
This is truly beautiful.
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Most welcome moushmi. And I am glad that you liked it.😊😊
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I suppose that is the sweet thing about love ❤️
Maybe!!
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It could be, but then when you are being overpowered, it can get complicated.
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The complication is possible. I agree
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Wow!
Love does get messed up that way sometimes. Being aware of it is the first step …
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I agree, thank you for being encouraging.
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You are very welcome.
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Bonds always do that. Not the close ones but the one when they start overpowering you and you start loosing yourself and your own identity
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I completely agree,. Thank you so much dear fro sharing this here.
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Your welcome ☺️
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Sometimes they do not know any better.
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I know 🙂
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Is it your present situation imagining past
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Nope.
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I am sending your my kisses and hugs…
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Thank you so much dear. 🙂
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