I have my own doubts and reluctance when it comes to this poetry, if at all it can be called one. I wrote it almost a year ago, and have never come about to posting it. So now you know how much I was hesitant to share this with anyone. It has taken me a year and another three days to have the courage to share this with you or anyone for that matter.
So now before I change my mind, I am going to hit publish, and let you guys judge me..
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Where are you hiding away from me?
Why, dear love, why do you hide from me?
Are you hiding beneath the sky?
The sky that is dark and gloomy
The empty face
That is raining down on me?
Are you hiding betwixt the stars?
The stars, magnificent and twinkling
A beautiful constellation
That is shining upon me?
Are you hiding behind the full moon?
A moon, calm and comforting
The complete façade
That is spreading its borrowed light on me?
Are you hiding among the woods?
The woods and trees that seem all lonely
The empty silence
That is lumbering down on me?
Are you hiding behind the sun?
The sun that is bright and radiant
The blinding fury
That is scorching down on me?
Are you hiding behind the mountains?
The mountains that are far and away
The scratchy road
That is soaring upon me?
Are you hiding among the seas and oceans?
The oceans that are waving in
The tumultuous uproar
That is really trembling me?
Are you hiding among the winds?
The winds, rapid and raw
A soft touch
That is truly whistling down on me?
In vain you hide from me
Why, dear love, why do you hide from me?
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Thank you once again, if you have come this far!! Did not expect you to.
Wow it’s amazing 👌👌👌 very well penned 👍😊
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Thank you so much.
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Why did you deny us from enjoying this beautiful poem for so long Moushmi? Genuinely good dear. You should write poetry more often:)
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Thank you so very much Radhika. I am too flattered now 😀
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Well done! Don’t ever be afraid to share!
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Thank you so much.
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It is such a lovely poem. Why would not publish it before
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Thanks a lot. I think since something was hidden from me, I tried hiding this poem from everyone!!
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This is amazing dear. I hope you find him soon.
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Thanks a lot 🙂
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Beautiful poem dear!!
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Thank you so much.
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welcome !!
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Thanks a lot dear.
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This is wonderful…✨✨
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Thanks Aditi..
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Beautifully written poem ! Why did you hide this from us? 🙂
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Oh thank you so much Megala.
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Hahah, we often have inhibitions about our work, and sharing them feels like such a challenge!
But this was a lovely piece, dearest Moushmi!🌸✨
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Thank you so, sooo much Shreya, but I request please don’t be modest and keep my heart. I still have my doubts about this one.
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Oh, that’s okay. Perhaps because it is something different than usual. But I did enjoy it, it has a sort of freshness (maybe because you described all these natural bodies, the sun and the stars) and the imagery is wonderful😊
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Thanks once again. (I am blushing now :-D)
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Lovely! I am glad this is finally out of the closet!❤️
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Hahaha, out of the closet, sure..
Thanks a lot dear 🙂
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I think many of us in the world right now feel this way …
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I couldn’t agree more 🙂
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😘
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This is sweet, you should write more poems 🙂
Although I must say I have two left hands (if that expression exists) when it comes to poetry 😀
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Thank you so much.
I am unsure about that expression tooo 😀
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I liked this post it has depth to it and a great topic.Plus the Pooh and Piglet gif at the end was a sweet surprise. 😁
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Thanks a lot dear.
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😊
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I’m visiting WordPress after an year n indeed worth it!! Like something nice I have read !!keep up the great work!
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WOW, That is a compliment which I was not expecting. Thanks a lot dear.
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So much has changed!! Since thinking so much before posting this one to now posting a poem everyday!!! 😀 well you always had that spark didnt you!!
With this i have (once again!) finished all your pending posts to read (i know you will again say it’s not a syllabus! 🙄)…but what to do…your posts are so addictive!! I intended to read only the love and lust one but then got hooked!!! 😅
And i was also wondering what will you be thinking….this guy is so stupid…reading and enjoying even such old posts!! And giving you a huge list of notifications!! 🙈 .. dont know how much of an inconvenience it may have caused you 🙈🙈 or maybe brought a smile to your face 🤔 (which you need btw!) … im hoping for the latter!!! Thanks!!!
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Thanks sifar, it was sure the later!
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Glad to know that 😊
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