न जाने क्यों,
मुझे उस ढलती शाम के
अधूरे चाँद से अलग ही प्यार है.
*
Somehow,
I brace a different kind of love for that half moon,
advancing the evening.
PS:I know I could have never come up with an English translation, sounding almost the same as the Hindi version; still worth a try may be?
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Hindi mai Bahout hi badhiya lga…😊😊
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Thank you so much mona. Such a loooooong time!!
Hope all’s well?
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Yeah… not inspired enough to write anything. Will be back soon…Hopefully!
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Yes, please! I hoping that too 🙂
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Nice moon
😀😀
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Thanks.
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I love that too. And yeah the English version can’t do justice to the Hindi one
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Thanks so much.
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Indeed, the beauty of words remains locked in the language it is originally penned in.
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Thanks so much dear.
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“Do not know why,
Me that morrow evening
There is only love from the unfinished moon.”
this was how google translated. i love the last line.
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Thanks Buddy, but I am pretty sure no one who understand the language is going to like the Google translation . 😀
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So beautiful!❤️
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Thank you 🙂
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I love the feeling of this poem – beautifully done ❤️
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Thanks so much Shantanu. I love the feel that feeling too 😉
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😊🌸👍
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But today is The Full Moon😉
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There my friend, lies the irony!! 😀
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Irony and sarcasm, greatest art of Writing
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Absolutely 😉
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Thank you for trying to translate, sounds good to me… I can’t read Hindi so am grateful… 👍
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Hi, thanks a lot for stopping by and leaving behind an honest comment. Would love to see you here again.
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Wah!! Stunning pic!! And mesmerising lines! I loved the hindi lines and skipped the english one as that would have diluted the taste! See you write so well in hindi too!! Should more!!
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Thanks, I know you are being too generous with your appreciation here.
I do write in Hindi, not so much, but every once in a while, and it remains hidden in a journal, or a hidden folder on my screen. Only recently have I posted a couple or two posts here.
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No i mean it when i say it! I like it a lot….i think i should steal that hidden journal now 😈 if dont want that to happen then post more 😅
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Hahaha my friend, no one, I repeat no one has ever been able to even look at that journal, let alone steal a few glance of that page. You stand the thinnest chance of stealing it :-p
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Oh that makes me even more ‘oh so curious’ now!! 🤩🤩 i will take the help of my friend – the coffee hater – to disappear it from under your nose!! 😈
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Just try!
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First i have to get mr coffee hater freed from your spell to get the job done! 😁
He is spending a lot of time with you now 🥺
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Oh how novice of you, yo really think anyone specially mr. Coffee hater can be freed from my spell!! Woe, do you even know me 😀 :-p
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Haha…i know some tricks to distract you from afar… like a nice cup of coffee, a big chocolate, some dance music and a book! And then i will break the spell and free mr coffee hater 😈
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Lol! You are such a novice :-p
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Haha….that we will get to know of very soon 😈
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Beautifully written! I love that too!!
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Thanks so much.
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Always my pleasure 😊
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Beautiful lines for the first time i read your message in Hindi
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I share in Hindi very rarely, thanks anyways 🙂
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Now I wish I knew the Hindi version…lol
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Hahah
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