Something from a very confused and a very aggressive me.
I see a girl standing erect, head high, hair open, long and roughly combed. She has gripped her sides of the dress tightly, way too tightly. Her toes are clinching the floor, scratching it. Her hair hides the corner of her face.
She is fair, a small mark on her right cheek, though not visible. But her fair skin is turning pink and slowly red; red with anger, red with rage.
She has a fluffy and sharp eyebrow. Just as it was suppose to be, giving her eyes a beautiful and lustrous look. Her eyes, big and wide, hazel brown in color; cute yet cunning, bold yet beautiful, shy yet audacious, talkative and yet tight lipped.
Her eyes speak a lot; tells me about her anger, about her grief. Slowly her eyes too have only one color and that is red. I see controlled tears in her eyes now.
She…
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Oh, but the tone in your writing really reflects the inner conflict inside you at that time regarding the issue of inequality.
But we all are making efforts to sort ourselves out, because that’s the first step of sorting out the problems that lie outside us, by solving problems within us first.
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Thanks so much for reading it and leaving behind this warming comment. I really appreciate it.
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All my pleasure. 🙂
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Great writing!
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Thanks so much Winnie.
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You’re welcome!
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Honest and raw! Loved it!❤️❤️
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Thanks Richa.
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So well written. Really good.
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Thanks so much.
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Sure, she will win the challenge!
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Thanks Megala.
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“One, that will not understand her. Two, with whom she cannot share everything, and three, with whom she wants to share everything but they are unavailable for her.”
This line touched me❤️ I loved this post, Moushmi. Absolutely loved it
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Thanks so much for sharing your wonderful thoughts about my piece 🙂
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You’re most welcome ❤️
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Fabulous post
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Thank you 🙂
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Please read my first post
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LOVED the writing, have a super weekend, yaaay!!!!
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Thanks a lot dear.
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This is a brilliant piece – the way described her angst, her frustration is so well put. And the three kind of people was ❤️ – and for the PS – Damn the society, damn the men – let her soar, let her fly, let her love
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Thanks so much Shantanu. You are just too kind.
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you are so very welcome
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