A bilingual writer, Moushmi Radhanpara has authored three poetry collections so far, namely POSIES and 03:21 AM –An Ode to Rust & Restlessness, and Resignation of an Angel. She is also scribbling an unplanned rough draft of a story as a part of NANOWRIMO 2020 and hopes that something might come out of it. She has also co-authored two books, The Lockdown Stories and Mirage so far. Her poetries can be found on her blog https://aestheticmiradh.com/ and a few other online portals. She believes in the fact that a better reader makes a better writer. Reading a 100 books a year is her latest obsession. She can be found either drunk on coffee or hiding away from everything and admiring the gorgeous sun.
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Thanks Shantanu, I know what you are talking about. Its like someone is stabbing you, and you can feel the pain, and taste the blood, and see the person smiling, all at the same time.
Thanks again for reading this.
I felt just what I felt when I saw a particular scene in the horror movie “Shutter” (won’t go deep since it would be a spoiler)
It was cruel, disgusting, throat wrenching, yet shut in silence. Beyond me, how you put it in words so simply, but it reminded me of that scene, and that shook me to the core.
I cry inside for what the woman is having to endure. A one-sided pleasure that is causing her pain both physically and emotionally. Such a powerful piece.
Hair raising!! So well written Moushmi!
A lost body and a battered soul! The soul – which can never recover! The body – probably! How lust and greed eclipses everything – the love, the pain, the consent, the soul, the respect – all just vanish in front of them… and seeing the monster gratifying and satisfying himself…smiling…unmindful of the broken soul in front of him! And the victim – timid, stabbed, bloodied and seeing her oppressor in front of her – smiling!! Like being killed slowly with a sword and looking into the eyes of the killers … the happy smiling eyes which though seem open – yet are closed! And this is the sad reality of innumerable homes!! And of innumerable such monsters who roam outside wearing a cloak of respect and morality yet being a devil in own houses!
Wow!❤️
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Thanks.
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Agony of not just a body but a soul bruised so well written ….. bravo 👏
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Thanks so much Sakshi, for perceiving it so well. Otherwise the lost body is all what people see.
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Profound and deep poem of a poor soul being eaten up with no say at all. Too good, Moushmi
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Thanks so much for reading this, Kamal.
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Welcome always dear Moushmi.
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Oh this is heart wrenching. I am in agony, I am furious on such atrocities. You Moushmi write beyond beautiful ❤️
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Thanks Shantanu, I know what you are talking about. Its like someone is stabbing you, and you can feel the pain, and taste the blood, and see the person smiling, all at the same time.
Thanks again for reading this.
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Yes, Moushmi. You wrote it so beautifully
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Thanks again.
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My pleasure
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I’m so touched by this piece
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Thank you.
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Your words left me speechless… 💔
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Thanks dear for reading it so beautifully.
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I feel like I have a knife trespassing my heart 😞
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I am sorry, but I guess it does feel so, isn’t it!
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Very touchy one, beautiful coining of words and the presentation.
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Thanks so much.
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This is so deep and touching!
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Thanks for reading it Kranti.
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Always my pleasure 😊
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I really am so proud reading this! Because you have said it all in few words, the pain, the cruelty 🙌
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Oh Aditi, you are just exaggerating 😉
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nice work of erotica
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Principles..😔😔😔😔😔
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😦
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I felt just what I felt when I saw a particular scene in the horror movie “Shutter” (won’t go deep since it would be a spoiler)
It was cruel, disgusting, throat wrenching, yet shut in silence. Beyond me, how you put it in words so simply, but it reminded me of that scene, and that shook me to the core.
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Thanks so much. you have made my day.
But I am sorry if it was so heart wrenching for you.
May be my next poem will lift you up 😉
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No no, sometimes the truth in the rawest form tend to shake people to the core. 😄
Sure, looking forward to it.
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That is disturbing …yet so much a reality.
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I agree. Thanks for reading.
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Written very well but hard to read.
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Thank you 🙂
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Wow! Brilliantly written!❤️❤️
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Thank you so very much Richa.
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So beautifully penned! Hits you like a major punch in the gut.
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Thank you so much. I am glad you find it good.
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ah, a tale of pain and pleasure! Well put.
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Thanks.
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Excellent writing, Moushmi, you really touched a nerve of reality for many. Well done to you!
xoxoxo
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Thanks so much Carolyn.
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I cry inside for what the woman is having to endure. A one-sided pleasure that is causing her pain both physically and emotionally. Such a powerful piece.
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Thanks so very for visiting and reading.
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You are very welcome!
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Heartfelt, but you conveyed the emotions so deeply!
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Very powerful. Sad state of affair yet accepted in the society.
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Thanks dear.
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Hair raising!! So well written Moushmi!
A lost body and a battered soul! The soul – which can never recover! The body – probably! How lust and greed eclipses everything – the love, the pain, the consent, the soul, the respect – all just vanish in front of them… and seeing the monster gratifying and satisfying himself…smiling…unmindful of the broken soul in front of him! And the victim – timid, stabbed, bloodied and seeing her oppressor in front of her – smiling!! Like being killed slowly with a sword and looking into the eyes of the killers … the happy smiling eyes which though seem open – yet are closed! And this is the sad reality of innumerable homes!! And of innumerable such monsters who roam outside wearing a cloak of respect and morality yet being a devil in own houses!
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What can I say, that’s the harsh reality, or society we live in.
Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts.
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