He strolled into the room
Silence screaming behind him,
She garnered herself on the couch
Terror and throes screaming from inside her.
The stress, the tension surfacing
The unknown reconciling,
His anger transpiring
Her calm deescalating.
And in a sap all was lost
A yank through her ruffled hair,
An irate haul on her head
Her body forcefully standing.
A jab, a thump, a knock
And there she was,
Rocking herself on the floor
Alone, withstanding.
The relentless pleads had not sufficed
And so came the determined decision,
With anger and terror, the dwellers of heart
She thwacked between his legs, a brawny art.
And there he lay, beside her
On the self made land, wrenching in pain,
Two pairs of red gory eyes, glaring at each other
Heavy, strong breaths, petrifying the other.
Wow, you write so beautifully. The raw emotions were so heartfelt – it shook me and the vivid picture you drew is going to linger for a while – keep firing your pen – stay beautiful
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thanks so much Shantanu. You have really been very kind with you words here.
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My absolute pleasure, Moushmi
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strong and uphold feelings shared. emotions that are hurt and looking for comfort.
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Thanks so much for reading.
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What is the word I need – intense! You have woven a powerful image that is going to linger for a long time…
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Thanks so very much Deboshree. Deeply appreciated.
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Truly, your writing has been so evolved. Intense and scenes were switching to and fro in mind while reading it. Great job!
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Thanks so much.
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Absolutely brilliant!👏👏
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Thanks Richa.
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So intense! Powerful vocabulary emphasising the raw emotion of this battle…
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Thanks so much dear. I am glad you like this.
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Wow. I love this
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Thanks Sneha.
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Wow! Profoundly and beautifully penned!
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Thanks Winnie.
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You’re welcome!
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Oh so painful.
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I know it is, thanks for stopping by.
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Powerful one.. 👌
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Thanks.
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🙌🙌
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😀
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Truly awesome!!!
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Thanks.
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This is so intense and heartfelt!!
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Thank you kranti.
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My absolute pleasure! 💖
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Powerful!
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Thanks so much.
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Hmmm I wish she had a knife close by …….but this too serves him right …….. bravo 👏👏 👏
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Thanks Sakshi! I guess for now she herself is her dagger?
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ahaaaa like that
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I like that😊
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😀
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Intense, angst and raw emotions laden with tragedy is painting and lent expression. Superb Moushmi.
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Thanks so much Vishal.
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“…With anger and terror, the dwellers of heart…” its beautifully expressed… It’s strong and bold and intense…..
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Thanks so very much.
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Always welcome
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Wow this is deep and poignant words so well composed, Moushmi. Loved it
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Thank so much, you are being too generous with your words.
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U write like that dear Moushmi. Welcome dear
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A writing which creates a vivid picture in the mind of the reader!! Well written!!
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Thanks so much.
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