Walking down that lane
An identical cup of coffee in hand,
Her mesmerizing smell brushed my senses
And I just fell in love.
Clad in a simple red rayon saree
Defining so alluringly her beautiful body,
A mundane watch on her left wrist
Elucidating simplicity, discarding the dramatic twist.
Her loquacious brown eyes inadvertently looks at me
And in a flash, she hypnotized me,
Her soft lips gave out a melodious rasp
And my heart skipped a beat, just like that.
She didn’t win me over with just her somatic charms
I melted into a glaze, by her smiling electrical storm,
I stood there, heart in my mouth; lost; engulfed
And just like that I fell in love.
I can feel your words, and your words spell me all over🦋
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Thanks so much. I am glad you like it..
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My pleasure🦋I hope you enjoy your day🦋
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Now I believe one gaze can make you fall in love…
Superbly portrayed emotions 💕
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Hah! Thanks, what a wonderful comment you land here.
Love and hugs to you.
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This is beautiful!
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Hey, thanks so much for reading.
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oh my god this is beyond beautiful – you are slaying it 🌸🌸
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Thanks for that warm comment.
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My absolute pleasure
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Gorgeous ❤
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Thanks Deboshree. You are really being kind.
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Absolutely beautiful! 🙂
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Thank you Pragalbha.
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A perfect lesson in poetry, being aware of all senses, emotions and depiction of sentiments…the watch she wore, saree and being hypnotized by love. After all, simple things that captures our heart in a woman, fiercely independent and confident 🙂
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Thanks so much for such a warm comment Vishal.
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So beautiful 💖
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Thanks so much Radhika.
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Beautiful ❤
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Thanks for reading.
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So you dont know love but still know how to fall in one! 😄
Nice poem!
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Hahaha apparently,
thanks so much.
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