Walking down that lane
An identical cup of coffee in hand,
Her captivating smell brushed my senses
And I just fell in love.
A crop top and a snuggish denim skirt
Defining unpretentiously her grimacing smirk.
Hair curly and wild, and on her feet some ragged sneakers
Elucidating the most mundane, screaming through her sharp features.
Kohl smeared and black smoldering eyes
Screeching the unknown and the hidden lies,
Oh, what with the black luscious lips
Without any trace of a smile, makes my heart flip.
The rage, the hatred, the agony quite visible
All making her to me, surprisingly irresistible,
Her secrets, her valor, her daunting self
Making me feel like a fustian elf.
She didn’t win me over with her mysterious meander
I melted into a glaze, by her dark loathful candor.
I stood there; fiery; lost; engulfed
And just like that I fell in love.
ahh, so beautiful.
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A beautiful journey of falling in love. Wow ❤
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Thanks,
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This was really dreamy.
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Thanks Deboshree.
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I flowed down in a smoothly flowing waterfall. A great painting!! 🙂
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Thanks so much.
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You are welcome!! 🙂
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Beautiful journey shared Moushumi
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Thanks.
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The perfect way to fall in love – write the girl side of the story now
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I tried, but I am pretty sure, it’s not up to the mark!
You portray the ‘she’ beyond any words.
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I am sure it is beautiful. Why don’t you post it. Thanks you for always saying beautiful words
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I just did!
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Cool let me check
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Hah! I am already nervous! What if my report card says ‘fail’ :-p
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I just commented
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What a flow in the arc of the story- just like that i fell in love with your poetry!
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Hahaha thanks Aditi.
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All those little things, they rooted love! Nice one. 🙂
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Thanks.
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Oh this is so beautiful
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Thanks Sakshi. 🙂
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My pleasure
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How beautiful!
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Thank you.
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So beautiful!❤️
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Thanks so much Richa.
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Enticing and imagination at its best and the picture is apt, Moushmi
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And just like that the readers fell for the words.
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Oh, thanks so much. I might just have to hide the blushing 😉
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Haha, you can be funny at times. 😛
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😀
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