She was walking alone, dazed, on a torturous esplanade
Fighting battles that she didn’t know existed within,
Shaky, confused, confounded
Adrift amidst her own gloomy labyrinth.
Having abandoned her modest attire
The saree, the simplicity, long discarded,
Adorning herself in skirts, she became a voracious liar
Determining to no more forsake her heart unguarded.
With an extra layer of seething gory kohl
She strived to camouflage her inner sufferings,
The dark lips concealing the agony, the rage exalted at a knoll
While her innocence, her honesty;
Secretively yet commandingly tumbling.
She thought she’d garner and hoard her emotions
Pretending to be strong, while her insides shivered,
But her eyes failed her miserably deceiving all notions
Pulling her into an emotional whirlwind blizzard.
She was determined to make herself be loathed
Pining to remain abandoned, isolated and lone,
Yearning for no one to heal her soul
Hardly discerning that in a stance he’ll come
And all her aches will be enthroned.
Oh dear! I love this❤️
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And you said you didn’t like it?? This is one of the most beautiful poems I have read in recent past. And yes, she is will find her solace ❤️❤️
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Thank you so much Shantanu. You are just being too kind. But I do hope she finds her solace.😊
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I am not kind. I am stating facts. You write beautiful ❤️
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Much obliged.
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😊🌸
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Hoping she will find that healing connect….
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Me too. Thanks.
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another one falls prey to the stance, happens when you try too hard not to fall
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Haha, yeah another one falls.
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I hope she finds peace… Beautifully written ❤
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Thanks so much.
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This is fantastic! I just got inside the poem and I could feel it. The way you have written the emotions is amazing! ☺️
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Thanks so much, I am so glad you like it.
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Also, why am I unable to open your page?
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Is it? I am trying to fix it. 🙂
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No worries.
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So true. When u try to pretend what u r not u tend to tremble.. beautifully written
it’s a solace tat I ache for
A peace of mind I search
No words no smiles can hide
The emotional turmoil I go through.
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Thanks so much for your beautiful lines above. They truly resonate here.
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Thanks for the motivation
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What an urgent yet understated pining for peace 🙂
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Thanks for a meaningful read.
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This is brilliantly written! Absolutely beautiful!❤️
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Thanks so much.
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Heartfelt
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Thanks.
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Oh yes❤️
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😀
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This is so beautiful! It is a wonderful description of that we all go through as poets and humans. Thank you for the follow… I hope I dont disappoit 🙂
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Thanks so much for this wonderful comment.
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You’re very welcome 🙂
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etter make that “disappoint” 🙂
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Hell, I give up, lol
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Hahaha, I get it 😉
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🙂
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you know, you’re a magician.
what a beautiful poem it is.
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Thanks so much, you are being too generous with your words.
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You are amazing! This is such a beautiful poem!
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Thanks so much, I am glad you like it
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The hope for the better good to come. 🙂
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😀
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What a beauty you create with words my dear!!
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Thanks so much.
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My pleasure! 💖
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You capture the human emotions so well, Moushmi!
Kudos! 🙂
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Thanks so much Carolyn.
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Your poetry is exquisite, one after the other!!
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Oh, thanks so much dear. Your words mean so much to me.
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I hope he comes and heals her😊
Beautiful poetry❤❤❤
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Thanks so much,
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Hoping that she who is searching for her love will find it someday. Too good poem.
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