There is a whirlwind of chaos inside her
An entropy, a madness, a little emptiness
That ceases her sanity from within.
The mania, the frenzy, the wilderness
All a part of her nugatory existence.
The deadening disarray enchaining her minds
Building a claustrophobia
Which you may never succeed to define.
The restlessness, the anxiety, the neurosis
All a part of her woebegone reality.
She is imprisoned betwixt the chain and its steely embrace,
She resides inside the merciless bolt and clasp,
And yet she has the zeal to envisage dreams,
To live in a reverie, a trance, a ravishing fantasy,
Her weening tenacity terrorizing her pandemonium to feebly vamoose.
Beautiful poem Moushumi
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Thanks so much.
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What choice of words.. beautiful.. 👏🏼🤗😇👌🏼💕
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Thanks so much 😀
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Mind blowing poem dear 🙌
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Thank you.
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My pleasure 😊
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Niceeeeee
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Thanks,
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freedom lies within
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True.
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Beautifully said … . .loved the last few lines!!
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Thank you so very much, I really appreciate your spending so much time here.
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It truly is my pleasure! 😊💖
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This is brilliantly written! Beautiful!❤️
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Thanks Richa,
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Brilliant choice of words, beautiful poem!
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Thanks so much.
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This is one of your best for sure ………loved it❤️
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Thanks so much. You have made my day!
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My pleasure always
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Lovely words my friend
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Thanks so much for visiting and reading.
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Beautiful piece of writing!
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Thanks Megala.
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Loved it! You captured both aspects very well: the suffocation and the desire to flee.
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Thanks so much Deboshree.
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Wohaa this is mind boggling, what words, what an ending!!! 🔥 🔥
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thanks aditiiiiii
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Nice mixing and matching of words 😊❤
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Thanks.
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The choice of words, the grit she displayed and your cast – phenomenal
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Thanks so much.
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My absolute pleasure
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Beautiful poetry 💕💕💕
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Thank you so much dear.
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Beautiful!! Your choice of a wide array of words reflects your impressive vocabulary and your usage of them at the right place reflects your command over the language – both the qualities of a great writer and poet!! Superb!! 👌 👌
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Thanks so much, I am only trying Sifar.
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Keep treating us to more of this!!
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“She was determined to make herself be loathed” ❤️ powerful!!
Another nice one!! Though i liked ‘Her Mysterious Meshuga’ more than this but this one also has its own charm!
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Thanks again 😀
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Wow excellent choice of words so well composed, Moushmi. Loved the poem.
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