Todays evening sun
Reminds me of him…
A ‘Him’- lonely, vibrant and distant.
When I bask myself in its glory
To brighten my inner joys,
To enliven my hurting hunger.
I draw him to me, in
The dusk of my glooming room
And sit atop
Mouth on mouth,
Body on body,
Craving, thirsting-
The mundane murmers soaring, sigh
The rumblings
The thrusting
The grieving agony-
The passion, the breathing
Slowly moving.
And then the night steals him,
The romantic notions of sun,
The patronising night, and his stealth.
And all I am left with,
Is a gentle throbbing,
A longing lust,
And my eyes dreaming.
Ps: Please don’t give up on me. I’ll catch up with you guys very soon.
so well done!
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Waah 👏
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😀
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Thanks.
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my pleasure. 🙂
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A longing lust in dreamy eyes..enticing
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Thanks ESP. 😀
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Wondering what would a painting look like based on this post.😀
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You have made me thinking, but I am sure, definitely better than the poetry 😉
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That’s an interesting thought
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Everyone should try it.😁
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Yup, I am not at all a painter, still there is a boost to go
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Good !Try it.😁
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Akhila, did I land in your spam>
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Nope..you are at the right place
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I love it! Kudos!❤️
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Thanks Richa.
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Stunning visual imagery! Loved your choice of subject too.
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Thanks so much Deboshree, your are just ebbing too kind.
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Nope, only honest 🙂
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When the heart yearns for love, it finds every reason to find him in the wilderness or otherwise – a beautiful poem
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Thanks so much Shantanu.
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My absolute pleasure
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A wonderful read! Well done🙌
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This is so beautifully written!! I wish I had your talent. Xx
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Thanks so much.
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Thanks Aditiiiii
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Lovely composition
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Thanks so much.
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Wow, wonderfully penned!!
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Thanks so much Kranti.
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My pleasure! 😊
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I cannot give up on you with such sensational words firing the imagination and heartbeats thrumming the soul 🙂
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Oh, thanks so much Vishal, you make me blush 😉
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Such a pleasure and blushing at the picture of you blushing Moushmi 🙂
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Hahaha,
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💕
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Kya bath heii…moushmi in some other world..😉
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Hehehe
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So beautiful!
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Thanks.
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