You said it was love,
And I believed in you and called it love-
I fused in you
And lost all I had.
I loved you with all I had
And you deceived me with all you could
All I claimed was, you to love me too
And all you did was betrayed me with all my feelings too.
But what could I have expected,
I wanted sunshine and rains and winters
I wanted all-
But unknowingly I entered a silent brawl.
I wronged myself, in believing in you
For I think I demanded sunshine off the morning dew,
It’s not your fault, as rains only provide thunder
And a snowfall in scorching summers would only be a wonder.
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A bilingual writer, Moushmi Radhanpara has authored three poetry collections so far, namely POSIES and 03:21 AM –An Ode to Rust & Restlessness, and Resignation of an Angel. She is also scribbling an unplanned rough draft of a story as a part of NANOWRIMO 2020 and hopes that something might come out of it. She has also co-authored two books, The Lockdown Stories and Mirage so far. Her poetries can be found on her blog https://aestheticmiradh.com/ and a few other online portals. She believes in the fact that a better reader makes a better writer. Reading a 100 books a year is her latest obsession. She can be found either drunk on coffee or hiding away from everything and admiring the gorgeous sun.
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Wow deep words of a lover who gave her all but was rejected nevertheless. Apt picture of suppressed vehemence. Great poem, Moushmi.
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Thanks so much Kamal.
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Welcome Moushmi.
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True , honest and pure love can’t be wrong/ fault , betrayal is wrong.
Nice expression.
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Thanks dear.
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“It’s not your fault, as rains only provide thunder
And a snowfall in scorching summers would only be a wonder.”
Such beauty in these words ❤
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Thanks Deboshree.
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There’s no more feeling of isolation as to when a person who you thought was in love with you, was not. A beautiful entry!
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I agree with you, that is a pathetic feeling.
Thanks for the read 🙂
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I really enjoy all of your poems, Moushmi. Your words are words of beauty.
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Thanks so much Tom.
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Are you alright my girl?
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I am absolutely Perfect, Akhila. 🙂
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Powerful, Moushmi… Great written expression…
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Thanks so much,
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Great read. Though I wish it wasn’t so heart breaking.
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I know it is sad. Thanks for reading.
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The end….. Beautiful!! ❤
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Thanks Anupriya,
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Amazing and very deep. I particularly love the rhythm☺️
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Thanks so much.
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Wow, So deep and beautiful Moushmi!!
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Thanks kranti.
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My pleasure 😊
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😇👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼💕
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🙂
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Damn human, the betrayal and what may be love for you may be just a passing thought for others – loved your poem –
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Thanks, it is sad that we humans take emotions so callously 🙂
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Beautiful!
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Thanks.
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So deep and beautiful Moushmi!❤️❤️
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Thanks Richa.
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Heartfelt ……loved the way you’ve expressed it
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Thanks Sakshi.
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My pleasure
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Nice!! 👌 And you say you dont know much about love!! 😀
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Yes, I don’t know!Truly….
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Then you are truly a gifted writer! To write so well about emotions which you have not experienced!! 👌 👌
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and you are a well intended flatterer 😀
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♥️♥️♥️
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🙂
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It’s not your fault, as rains only provide thunder
And a snowfall in scorching summers would only be a wonder.
❤❤❤
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Thanks so much Yasmin 🙂
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