A bilingual writer, Moushmi Radhanpara has authored three poetry collections so far, namely POSIES and 03:21 AM –An Ode to Rust & Restlessness, and Resignation of an Angel. She is also scribbling an unplanned rough draft of a story as a part of NANOWRIMO 2020 and hopes that something might come out of it. She has also co-authored two books, The Lockdown Stories and Mirage so far. Her poetries can be found on her blog https://aestheticmiradh.com/ and a few other online portals. She believes in the fact that a better reader makes a better writer. Reading a 100 books a year is her latest obsession. She can be found either drunk on coffee or hiding away from everything and admiring the gorgeous sun.
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58 thoughts on “भटकन”
वाह! Waah!! Waaaah!! Loved it! भटकन!
Superb! 👏 That feeling of a delay before something is going to happen!! To take off. The wanderer….the gypsy…..the eternal thirst for travel…it’s you! The first two lines got me!
And a beautiful click as well…perfectly timed! 👌
Ps: there is a small typo in line 4
Hahaha as a matter of fact, they are mocking me these days, coming and standing exactly in couples. Should I post their mocking click here and just warn them? I think I’ll do that 😀
I will agree if you stop laughing, but I have been more on the other side of the experience, have been stuck up with such couples for no fault on my part.
I’m glad to hear you’re good. I’m doing fine. Couldn’t get the time and motivation to blog or even write these past few months but I’m back, hopefully! 🙂
वाह! Waah!! Waaaah!! Loved it! भटकन!
Superb! 👏 That feeling of a delay before something is going to happen!! To take off. The wanderer….the gypsy…..the eternal thirst for travel…it’s you! The first two lines got me!
And a beautiful click as well…perfectly timed! 👌
Ps: there is a small typo in line 4
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Thanks so much for an apt interpretation.
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It’s so beautiful…💞
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Thank you.
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दिल को स्पर्श करते शब्द।
और भटकते हुआ
न जाने केसे
मेरे दिल का तेरे दिल से रूबरू हुआ
फिर यूँही तेरे जहाँ में
सीमत कर बसर गया हु में।
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Oh Shantanu, thanks for these lovely lines.
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My absolute pleasure. It was your beautiful words that inspired it impromptu
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💓💕😇👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼…. Speechless..
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Oh thanks so much. You flatter me and make my day 🙂
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Pleasure always.. 😇💕
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Deft touch and elegance personified.
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Thanks Smayak.
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Something so relatable and how beautifully you said it and what a nice shot
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Thanks Aditi.
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This is amazing!! I really loved this, Moushmi!
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Thanks Shreya.
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Can I come too?
xoxoxo
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Oh, sure.
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How beautiful!
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Thanks
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Loved it!!!💙
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Thanks.
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Fascinating.
Cut its wings, and it shall walk.
Bind it and it shall rise above.
For it belongs to an abyss
and the abys lives forever in thee.
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You add a beautiful jewel here. Thanks so much.
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So beautiful ❤️
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Thanks dear.
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Wow, just wow.. heart touching words! ❤️
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Thanks Kranti.
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My pleasure! 💖
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Beautiful!
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Thanks so much Pragalbha.
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Kya baat hai Moushumi, bahut khoob likha hai 👌
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Thank you so much Radhika 🙂
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wah wah..the muse looks familiar, where is the rest of the family
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Hahaha, they are very busy these days!
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Making more families?
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Hahaha as a matter of fact, they are mocking me these days, coming and standing exactly in couples. Should I post their mocking click here and just warn them? I think I’ll do that 😀
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Lol mocking by appearing as couples, don’t shoot but ask them for tips?
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Are, they don’t listen only these days. You know na how these couples madly in love, can get!!🙄
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I know, by experience 😂
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Hahaha so you have been one of those couples who get themselves involved, mad over heels, and forget everything else turning their lives upside down 😀
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I will agree if you stop laughing, but I have been more on the other side of the experience, have been stuck up with such couples for no fault on my part.
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Me too!! I don’t know if I will ever get rid of these couples. if not I might just become one!
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yeah become one, and out-annoy those couples. choose wisely though!
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Oh I don’t know!! Just never been my cup of tea!
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go for it, over coffee? 😀
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Hahaha, yep coffee is always better😛
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Beautiful and lovely poetic words, Moushmi and the pigeon was so cute.
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Thanks so much Kamal.
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Welcome Moushmi
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Beautiful
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Thank you.
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Very nice ,loved it a lot.
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Thanks
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Beautiful! ❤️ How are you Moushmi? I haven’t blogged in quite a while! I missed so many of your posts. Gonna catch up soon 😀
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I am good, thank you. How have you been? Away for soooo long!
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I’m glad to hear you’re good. I’m doing fine. Couldn’t get the time and motivation to blog or even write these past few months but I’m back, hopefully! 🙂
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I hope so too 🙂
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