सूरज से गुफ्तगू #6


चलो जाओ, नहीं करनी तुमसे कोई मुलाकात
तुम नहीं चाहते तो नहीं करनी तुमसे कोई बात
दूर-दूर ही अच्छे हो
चाँद क बिना ही पुरे हो.
शायद इसी बात का गुर्रर है
चांदनी से पहले जो तुमसे मोहब्बत का इकरार किया है.
हमने तो कोई पर्दा न रखा था
पर तुम्हारे सुरूर का ताप ही गहरा था.
चल आज से सब बदल जायेगा
तेरी जगह चाँद का नाम लिया जायेगा
आज से रात को ही सपने  देखेंगे
सौंदर्य की जगह चांदनी को दे देंगे
बोल अगर है तुजे मंजूर
या फिर है तुजे मेरी ही मोहब्बत कबूल?

PS: However cliche this may sound anyone saying Kabool, kabool, kabool will not be entertained.


थोड़ी और गुफ्तगू : सूरज से गुफ्तगू #5

Published by Moushmi Radhanpara

A bilingual writer, Moushmi Radhanpara has authored three poetry collections so far, namely POSIES and 03:21 AM –An Ode to Rust & Restlessness, and Resignation of an Angel. She is also scribbling an unplanned rough draft of a story as a part of NANOWRIMO 2020 and hopes that something might come out of it. She has also co-authored two books, The Lockdown Stories and Mirage so far. Her poetries can be found on her blog https://aestheticmiradh.com/ and a few other online portals. She believes in the fact that a better reader makes a better writer. Reading a 100 books a year is her latest obsession. She can be found either drunk on coffee or hiding away from everything and admiring the gorgeous sun.

35 thoughts on “सूरज से गुफ्तगू #6

  1. lovely, the guft-gu is turning into a story now, so what did we learn from this episode?
    the one-sided loving and hopeful protagonist says, ‘enough is enough’ and seems determined to move on to easier moonlit zones.
    but no, the ending is a u-turn suspense. instead of moving on, a question is posed to Suraj. There is hope!

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