सूरज से गुफ्तगू #6


चलो जाओ, नहीं करनी तुमसे कोई मुलाकात
तुम नहीं चाहते तो नहीं करनी तुमसे कोई बात
दूर-दूर ही अच्छे हो
चाँद क बिना ही पुरे हो.
शायद इसी बात का गुर्रर है
चांदनी से पहले जो तुमसे मोहब्बत का इकरार किया है.
हमने तो कोई पर्दा न रखा था
पर तुम्हारे सुरूर का ताप ही गहरा था.
चल आज से सब बदल जायेगा
तेरी जगह चाँद का नाम लिया जायेगा
आज से रात को ही सपने  देखेंगे
सौंदर्य की जगह चांदनी को दे देंगे
बोल अगर है तुजे मंजूर
या फिर है तुजे मेरी ही मोहब्बत कबूल?

PS: However cliche this may sound anyone saying Kabool, kabool, kabool will not be entertained.


थोड़ी और गुफ्तगू : सूरज से गुफ्तगू #5

Published by Moushmi Radhanpara

A woman questioning almost everything, trying to find answers through her's and your words. I am on an unending quest, walking the paths of unknown. I am walking and walking, may be too slow, but I am doing it. I am happy as long as I do not stop. I will be content to fall, to fly, to swim, to drown, only never to stop.

35 thoughts on “सूरज से गुफ्तगू #6

  1. lovely, the guft-gu is turning into a story now, so what did we learn from this episode?
    the one-sided loving and hopeful protagonist says, ‘enough is enough’ and seems determined to move on to easier moonlit zones.
    but no, the ending is a u-turn suspense. instead of moving on, a question is posed to Suraj. There is hope!

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