Poetry has been a consistent part of my life, first reading and then writing. Though if someone would have said that I could try writing poems, a year back, I would have rolled my eyes and said, “Yeah, right!” Not that I have become very confident of my pieces, but I have come as far as trying to share them and be judged.
So, judge away a small poem that has been accepted for publication by Indian Periodical:
Do share with me what you think about this. It is always amazing to hear from you, and helpful to hear an honest opinion.

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Published by Moushmi Radhanpara
A bilingual writer, Moushmi Radhanpara has authored three poetry collections so far, namely POSIES and 03:21 AM –An Ode to Rust & Restlessness, and Resignation of an Angel. She is also scribbling an unplanned rough draft of a story as a part of NANOWRIMO 2020 and hopes that something might come out of it. She has also co-authored two books, The Lockdown Stories and Mirage so far. Her poetries can be found on her blog https://aestheticmiradh.com/ and a few other online portals. She believes in the fact that a better reader makes a better writer. Reading a 100 books a year is her latest obsession. She can be found either drunk on coffee or hiding away from everything and admiring the gorgeous sun.
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they made a very good choice.
congrats on being selected
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Thanks Buddy.
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Congratulations!!
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Thank you..
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lovely thought, congratulations … why is the name Dennis Gabot on it?
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The thought is by Dennis Gabot, the poem is in the link.
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ouch missed that, coming back to read it!
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Haha sure, no worries.
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It’s really beautiful and a little sad … love your use of colour 🙂
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Thank you so much dear.♥️
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my pleasure 🙂
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It is a lovely melancholy piece and I love the last line putting up a fight! Congratulations Moushmi. ❤️
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Thank you so much dear. I am glad you liked it.
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You are welcome, Mou.
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Yes absolutely true and I agree with these beautiful poetic splendor, Moushmi 👍👍 👍, it is not easy for everyone to understand a poet.
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Thank you so much kamal.
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Welcome Moushmi.
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Indeed it took a while to have a fix on your splendid poetry. Sums up the whole life of a sea until it veils it’s beauty under the dark only to rise and shine the next morning.
Don’t know whether I could sense the meaning right! But I love reading them..😊💙
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Thank you so much Samyak. I think the perception holds different from reader to reader. I loved your take on this.
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Congratulations and well deserved. I loved the poem and I kept thinking of colors and canvases, waiting for the sea to appear. The writing has the angst, the introspection, the helplessness but never a sense of defeat that pervades most of your writing.
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Thank you ESP. That defeat, I hope is only in my writings and not in reality.
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I hope so too M, I know you are not the type who would be comfortable in defeat, be it reality or writing, sometimes there is not much difference between the two.
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Congratulations! 🙂
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Thanks richa.
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Brilliant piece of poetry❤️
I especially loved the last line👏
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Thank you so much yasmin ji.
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You messaged me on my main page like 2 years ago. I kind of dropped this, but now I’m gonna bring back my blog. What ever this is. Congrats!!!
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Hm
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Congratulations Moushmi
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Thank you.
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Congratulations Moushmi 🙂 This is great news!
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Thanks so much Prajakta.
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Lovely piece 👌💕
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Thanks Deepika.
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Beautiful poem about poetry.
Congratulations! Well deserved!
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Thanks Megala.
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Congratulations, Moushmi, may you publish many more.
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Thanks so much.
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Congratulations!! It’s so beautiful, Moushmi.
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Thanks.
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