सुनो थोड़ा ठहर जाओ
तुमसे एक बात केहनी थी, वो बस सुनते जाओ
दिल आज फिर भर आया है
मै, रात तुम्हारे आने के इंतज़ार में काट लुंगी
तुम बस शाम सहारा बनते जाओ,
सुनो, बस थोड़ा ठहर जाओ.
A bilingual writer, Moushmi Radhanpara has authored three poetry collections so far, namely POSIES and 03:21 AM –An Ode to Rust & Restlessness, and Resignation of an Angel. She is also scribbling an unplanned rough draft of a story as a part of NANOWRIMO 2020 and hopes that something might come out of it. She has also co-authored two books, The Lockdown Stories and Mirage so far. Her poetries can be found on her blog https://aestheticmiradh.com/ and a few other online portals. She believes in the fact that a better reader makes a better writer. Reading a 100 books a year is her latest obsession. She can be found either drunk on coffee or hiding away from everything and admiring the gorgeous sun.
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I absolutely love this
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Thank you so much.
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सुनो, जरा, जब भी आना,
कुछ पल लेके आना,
पल भर के आकाश में बस कल तक रुक जाना,
आज भी मैं वहीं हूं, वहीं शाम और सुबह का अंदाज़ हूं।
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Kya baat!! Aapki lines ne chaar chand laga diye,
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चार चांद तो आपके अंदाज़ से हुआ, बस एक तारे ने थोड़ी गुफ्तगू करी चांद से।
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Ab tak hum sirf suraj se guftagoo karte the, aaj chaand se ki gayi baatein bhi sun li.
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बातें तो बातें होती है, आखिर चांद और सूरज भी तो एक शब्द का हिस्सा है, जिसे और हम जैसे लोग व्याख्या के साथ लिखते है। 🙂
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आप*
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So cute and yes so nice to be waiting for the sun to keep on shining. Lovely poem, Moushmi.
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Thanks Kamal.
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Welcome Moushmi 👍 👍👍 👍
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Lovely!💜
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Thanks Richa
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Beautiful🌼❤
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Thanks Aditi.
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Ab toh Suraj Sahab bhi aapke ke guftagu ka intezaar karte honge…😁 Bahut badiya Moushumi!
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Hahaha thanks Radhika.
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Just beautiful! 💖
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Thanks so much Kranti, you are just a dear 🙂
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You’ll sway him by your spectacular verses..let alone some romance in it.
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Haha that’s the intention!
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You have to really tell me now who this “Suraj” is??😍😄
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Haha, many of my readers are secretly asking me this! But then again, it’s a secret :-p
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😄ok
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lovely lines, pighla de suraj ko
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Impossible it is!
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Lovely lines Moushmi 🙂 It feels good to read something in hindi – has a special touch to the sentiments.
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Thanks so much.
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Beautifully written!❤
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Thanks Richa.
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Ahh ……aaj raat honi mushkil hai ….. Suraj doobne se inkaar Kar raha hai ……aapke alfazon ki Dori mein bandh Kar ….azzad hone ke khwaab Bunn raha hai
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Khayal accha hai par wo to apne man ka malik hai, use manane me waqt lagega shayad 😉
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Koshish mere dost koshish
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इतने प्यार से कहोगी तो, एक न एक दिन सूरज तो जरूर थोड़ा रूकेगा! ❤️
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Haha hume us din ka intezaar rahega.
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Intezaar bahut khoobsurat hota hai!
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